Holidays are too short
Don’t you just love having so much time to yourself in the morning, knowing that you have the whole day to spend? That's why I strongly believe that the school holidays are too short, and they must be changed to a week longer.
To begin I don’t get enough time to spend with my pony Poppy. I love playing and riding her but when it rains the ground is too slippery to ride her. I bet it would be nice and sunny if we had another week.
Secondly I wanted to go to the beach. We didn’t get time to because we were so busy doing things that needed to be done. Suddenly it’s the day before school and I had to get ready for school ‘’boohoo’’
Yet another reason why, my room is a mess and I didn’t get time to clean it up. Also we got another pony called Stormy. It would be good to have another week to get her settled in and start riding her.
To wrap it up, the school holidays are too short and MUST MUST be changed. Now you have a lot to think about.
I agree Ryeigh
ReplyDeleteSorry I forgot to put the l.
DeleteYou have put forward a good argument. I like the use of SHOUTY CAPITALS.
ReplyDeleteMy wish is that you could do a little bit more editing in your second paragraph and put full stops. My star is that I love the way you put boohoo on your second paragraph.CHARLOTTE
ReplyDeleteOk I will do that editing.
DeleteI agree that the holidays are too short.
ReplyDeleteEvelyn
Great Job Ryleigh, My star is that I love the way you put boohoo on your second paragraph and had capitals MUST.
ReplyDeleteMy wish is that you could work on your full stops.RUBY
Great job Ryleigh. I liked how you said to wrap it up, the school holidays are too short and MUST MUST be changed. Now you have a lot to think about.
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