Thursday, March 3, 2016

My moment time

I saw inky black surrounding me like the night .
I saw the big line waiting for me.  
I feel the endless swaying as I’m creeping through.
I feel the black blindfold tethered around my head.
I hear mum guiding me from behind.
I hear my voice shaking because I don’t want to fall.
I taste the cool air rush to my mouth.
I taste nerves jiggle in my stomach.
I wonder if I will fall?
I wonder if I will finish the course?

1 comment:

  1. Great work Ryleigh you have done an amazing piece of writing. Next time though you might want to tell us what you are doing in your writing. Apart from that amazing described words.

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